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i sink in one foot at a time
with the same anticipation
i would have while stepping into
the shadow of your naked body
if you were standing in front of me

i submerge myself
in the depths of lonely night
water hot with the scent
of your breath
if you were breathing on me
instead of the steam that
pricks my skin
and rises like your
face above mine would
if you were here.

i lay back slowly
letting it run through my hair
as your fingers would
if you were here
and it rises past my shoulders
drowning them in streams
of heat as you would
with your tongue
if you were here

it encircles my breasts
where your tongue would paint me
swallows my nipples
where your lips would embrace me
fills my navel and pours over
my waist sending pools
down between my lips
where you would part me
if you werent apart from me

i let the water hit me
where you are missing
let it bead up on my skin
and gush inside me
the space you would fill
with your electricity
heat and fire
if you were here

i arc back in dream and pulse
sending waves through this
flooded vessel
moving forth
with moonlight-speed inertia
illuminating my body
with candle glow
as you would with your
gift of nirvana
your love shooting
through me with
the power of ocean tide
tumbling tsunami
if you were here

water displaces
never replaces
energy is neither
destroyed
nor created
but is moved through me
with molecular mobility
where you will
someday sail in
and embark on my shore
displacing the water
that i need no more
well? what can i say? *blush*
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Given 2003-01-03
Listen to Utro as she sinks into the bath and writes magic into eroticism in the poem, "Displacement." She will explain afterward but it will only intensify the whole exhilarating experience she left you in when she said, "illuminating my body with candle glow as you would with your..."
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UchihaMindi Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2008
nice job!~
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PassionatlyLiving Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
very...moving..touching...interesting =O
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poetcrystaldawn Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007
Beautifully written.
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X-Cold-Hearted-X Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2006
So wonderful :)
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belak01 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2005   Writer
it was truely a plearure to read that. Its been a lon time since i have read something with such gorgeous flow.
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ConcreteVision Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2005
VERY well done! lucky guy, eh?:Plol
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Pavlova Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
This is, to be honest, one of the best poems I ever read.
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ultimatekai Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's so...good!!! Yay!!!
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CreativeJuices Featured By Owner May 28, 2005   Writer
I am astounded at the quality and taste of your writing. It's beautiful. :heart:
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senarauxa Featured By Owner May 18, 2005
really good, nice imagery, pretty good taste, though i missed the rhythm and the flow of the words,,, good work.......



"we are fighting dreamers"... u naruto
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