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I Inhale December

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December 5, 2002
Everybody knows I'm a sucker for poems about Winter and nifty spiritual journeys and the night sky. And, more especially, poems with lines like "The air hangs in the winter, with time's slow creeping pace, And Ursa's hibernating, in her home transfixed in space." I fear there's not a thing I can say here to justly capture the beauty of this piece- read it and let it speak for itself. Then read it again and again- Utro 's I Inhale December. Picked by `pachunka (Selected by ^faithwalker)
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Winter gives its breath in waves
of clearer mornings and crisper nights
It whistles past my ears and I sit
knees against my chest
wrapped in mother's quilt, patched
with handsewn stitchwork
Worn and frayed
A tattered shield half-filtering
December's evening
chill of air.

The stars, one thousand penlights
scattering cross the sky's
own patchwork quilt
of constellations, connecting
to my eye and followed
by my outstretched finger
tracing the Great Bear
through spiraling smoke
that dances from half-filtered
habit to despair.

My glowing wand
Gives its breath, enslaves
me with its whispered plight
in streaming deltas
upwards built
stacked freedom from my
sheltered sight
and I inhale December
while catering to dreams
of highways scrolling under me
in man-stitched asphalt seams.

The air hangs in the winter
with time's slow creeping pace
And Ursa's hibernating
in her home transfixed in space.

The miles of sky above me
the miles of road between
January's newborn year
and Ursa's waking spring.
I havent written since I got back to Texas, and I havent written poetry in an even longer time. I read "Miniature Houses" today by *deejbard and its beauty gave me inspiration to write again. Thanks Deej.

Matt made the beautiful screenshot for me. Thank you, love. Heart
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sans-soleil's avatar
this is enthralling