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s p o o n s by `utro:iconutro:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2003-2009 `utro
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I first released this poem for Contemplicity's second release, Grass. I was never completely satisfied with it. It's very minimal. So I decided to add some photography to it and present it as an Art Poetry piece.

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`MattSpire Jan 5, 2003, 7:36:26 PM
absolutely awesome photo baby!! y'know i love the poem, and it looks so amazing with that warped formating alongside the deflective stance of the spoons. im completely taken aback by the image -and- textual semantics. and hell, its just damned beautiful. full black-white spectrum gradation everywhere!! w00t! !!

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~icdragon Jan 5, 2003, 7:45:17 PM
Not much into poetry, but I love the photo! Makes me think of a woman laying on a man...

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~akyra Jan 5, 2003, 7:49:34 PM
alison...

this makes me smile and not want to stop. :) (Smile)

thank you.
:o (Eek)


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~xenothaulus Jan 5, 2003, 8:14:33 PM
Once again you prove your beautiful gift for weaving words. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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`ignite Jan 5, 2003, 8:19:18 PM
the photo fits perfectly with this piece. your words presented wonderful imagery, and the simplicity adds strength to the poem. a creative comparison..love, spoons. it flows with elegance.
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!alcoholic Jan 5, 2003, 8:56:24 PM
Wow.
I want to say everything Matt said, he beat me to it.
This was an awesome combination of word structure and geometrical chaos.
They play off of each other rather nicely.
Forgive my shitty comment, I feel my head is detached from my shoulders today.

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I. Read.
II. Contemplate.
III. Revolt.
:iconlordsethos:
~lordsethos Jan 5, 2003, 9:11:38 PM
Once again, I am at a loss for words.
Sensual with out the harsh erotic overtones so many think needs to be threaded into everything.
Beautiful.



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Artists can color the sky red because they know its blue; the rest of us must color the sky as it really is or others might think we're stupid.
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~i-candie Jan 5, 2003, 10:21:49 PM
amazing.. you are excellent with your wording :) (Smile)

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Chantal :)
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~theshadow330 Jan 5, 2003, 10:29:17 PM
a wonderfully metaphoric deviation :) (Smile)
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~batinabox Jan 5, 2003, 11:05:06 PM
the poem is beautiful... and the photograph sets it off perfectly...
amazing talent.
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